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  • outlaw-2's Avatar
    80 posts since May '07
    • Possession
      By: Outlaw-2 Extreme


      I see you; you turned, hands furtively on the torchlight,
      I feel you; you jerked forward, body as cold as ever,
      I hold you; you could not accept it, my presence,
      I called you out; you ran, with eyes filled with dread.

      I followed you; you sensed me all along,
      I backed off slightly; your calm face I can see,
      I whispered in your ear; you stammer, you quiver,
      I embrace you; hot tears ran down your face, in fear.

      … … …

      I froze; something hugged me,
      I spun around; no one I can see,
      A chill down my spine; I dashed in this pitch black darkness,
      An exit; my only safeguard I cannot find anymore.

      A tug; I felt it,
      No one; I knew it, I’m in an abandoned hospital,
      But why; I was beginning to accept it,
      Fear; altering into something else.

      … … …

      You ceased running; I began to wonder,
      Your chillness; I can no longer feel it,
      The smile on your face; faint, yet comfortable,
      Your mind; I feel that you’ve fallen for it.

      I embrace you; you gagged the moment I brushed against you,
      You knelt to the cold ceramic; you regretted your decision,
      Your smile; now carved into an uneasy leer,
      Your body; now mine, and yours.
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  • binarynwitz's Avatar
    727 posts since Dec '05
    • I like it.

      There is a constant tension, a familiar fear of the unknown.

      One of a style distinct to you. Why not try to embrace a different style to your current?

      You never know what sort of chemistry might occur Exclamation

      Good piece. Smile

  • DeadPoet's Avatar
    10,433 posts since Dec '03
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    19,505 posts since Jun '04
  • tare's Avatar
    17,209 posts since Aug '03
    • Originally posted by DeadPoet:
      Good piece, but what exactly happened? Question

      x2

      my ang moh not so good Embarassed

  • outlaw-2's Avatar
    80 posts since May '07
    • And I thought the title of the poem stated it all...

      It's about a person before and during the process of being possessed by a spirit, before the end of the poem...

      'Your smile; now carved into an uneasy leer,
      Your body; now mine, and yours.'

      -Indicates that the possession is complete.

      Surprised

  • DeadPoet's Avatar
    10,433 posts since Dec '03
    • Originally posted by outlaw-2:
      And I thought the title of the poem stated it all...

      It's about a person before and during the process of being possessed by a spirit, before the end of the poem...

      'Your smile; now carved into an uneasy leer,
      Your body; now mine, and yours.'

      -Indicates that the possession is complete.

      Surprised

      I see, thanks for the explanation. Mr. Green

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