Concealed Nakedness drawing
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hi, my names Aaron my 1st post. here is my drawing done earlier this year to reflect on my earlier secondary school years of my life. i did not really concentrate much on the details on this drawing. i have written a poem and general meaning for this pic but not showing here as i would like to know your interpretations of it. ( please try not to give sarcastic remarks ) or you might want to comment on the flaws which i know are many
Concealed Nakedness:
http://i141.photobucket.com/albums/r49/boyusflare/AaronsConcealedNakednessvopyright.jpg
you can feel around the drawing with your cursor to get the expand button visible to get a close-up bigger view of it.
paper: A4 office paper
pencils:2b,4b,6b
time:if not wrong is 11hrs
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Originally posted by boyusflare:hi, my names Aaron my 1st post. here is my drawing done earlier this year to reflect on my earlier secondary school years of my life. i did not really concentrate much on the details on this drawing. i have written a poem and general meaning for this pic but not showing here as i would like to know your interpretations of it. ( please try not to give sarcastic remarks ) or you might want to comment on the flaws which i know are many
Concealed Nakedness:
http://i141.photobucket.com/albums/r49/boyusflare/AaronsConcealedNakednessvopyright.jpg
you can feel around the drawing with your cursor to get the expand button visible to get a close-up bigger view of it.
paper: A4 office paper
pencils:2b,4b,6b
time:if not wrong is 11hrs
reference:none -
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thats ur art piece?
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seoti so kind...
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wow, i always appreciate ppl tat can draw
coz i cant draw
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may i noe why u use white, grey and black as colours ?
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cause it is art.Originally posted by gunner77:may i noe why u use white, grey and black as colours ? -
Your drawing is pretty good for secondary standard. Keep it up.
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the feelings.....a mixed (white and black contrast )and lost (her expression??)feelings? or seems uninterested??
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The way you've rendered the lighting is good, your subject has some volume, but you need to get the direction of the light consistent. It's a little stiff too, I can't tell if she's relaxed without looking at her face. But overall, it's good for a drawing done from memory.
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He used pencils...Originally posted by gunner77:may i noe why u use white, grey and black as colours ? -
to me...
you feel that there are positives and negatives of schooling
schooling is killing you
and you are very tired? -
thank you for helping me to upload the drawing hereOriginally posted by MyPillowTalks:
gunner77: ha coz i did this is graphite pencil. but i will dip into colourpencils and other mediums in the future
and thanks alot everyone for the replies!
Edited:
Kuali baba:thanks for the critique appreciated so now i am actually working on lightfall and tones on my current self-thought drawing wip ^^
DrAlienology: haha thanks for the interpretation. yes actually somethings in school affected me quite alot, and you can say sick and tired but now out of it le haha. -
very nice pic!!!
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nice work
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horny
just jking
got any other workpiece for us to appreciate -
Originally posted by mhcampboy:seoti so kind...
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thanks aHGer^83, de_middle and Daisuke-Kun
Daisuke-Kun: i have juz few more drawings that i will post in awhile later ^^ -
Wah A4 not bad for first try.Originally posted by MyPillowTalks:
try on a bigger piece of paper.
Maybe u get better results.
if its good.
u can hang it as a art.
try diff mediums, like paint or markers, or mixed both to get a better effect.
my 2 cents worth.
im not an artist. -
but her expression.. looks lost...Originally posted by boyusflare:thanks aHGer^83, de_middle and Daisuke-Kun
Daisuke-Kun: i have juz few more drawings that i will post in awhile later ^^ -
hanor hanor.Originally posted by aHGer^83:but her expression.. looks lost...
i think so too. -
Seotiblizzard: thanks for the recommendation. i will try paintings de, once i have reached my aim in grahpite that is. coz right now this drawing is not halfway through my final aim of what i want my style to be. but i'll work hard to try my best to improve
aHGer^83: ha thanks for the comment
here is the poem i wrote ( not good coz my 1st time writing and looks more like phrases instead of poem, but still... )
Poem:
She was a naive being
Always carried the innocent thought
That life was always filled with vibrance and beauty
Positive feelings was all she knew
Then one day darkness and gloom rained on her
Just like how positive and negative always come together
Hurt and pain trickled through her veins
All the fears not worth her tears
Emotional roots tangle and suffocate
She sunk deep into the emotions
Scanning down to the very depth
Where she found a heaven that her beauty truely lies
She danced and swirled in the moods of darkness
Ignoring the childish spirits of others
Even when they grasp every means to taunt and slash at her
Once again the positive in her arises
Enjoying the fruits of Concealed Nakedness -
Originally posted by boyusflare:Seotiblizzard: thanks for the recommendation. i will try paintings de, once i have reached my aim in grahpite that is. coz right now this drawing is not halfway through my final aim of what i want my style to be. but i'll work hard to try my best to improve
Welcome
Jia you.
Btw how old are u??